adi9hdirg
发表于 2010-4-16 03:46:26
我写的是单身和婚姻。。。
很多人会选择独居，但有些人更倾向婚姻。。。。
c0r33663
发表于 2010-4-16 05:56:02
因为live on one's own不是独立生活，独居的意思吗。当时想任何年龄段的人都可以选择独居，例如18岁成年到老都可以，但是在大学毕业到老这段时间内，独居基本上VERSUS 婚姻。。。只有在比如大学高中期间，独居可能涉及早早独立啊，尽快汲取社会经验啊之类的。鉴于G类考试不大面向学生。。。所以我就假定 living on one's own VERSUS marriage.了。。。
难道跑题了。。。因为他没说youngster啊，如果说比如youngster, teenager我肯定不会写婚姻的。
所以。。我写成了Keeping single VERSUS traditional marriage.....
猎鹰预测
发表于 2010-4-16 10:54:11
楼上的不用太担心啊，这种题目本来就有多种可能性的，只要你后面的论点论据比较合理，应该不会判你偏题的。
hlhy0200
发表于 2010-4-16 12:43:31
多谢！
后面写的是大致是独居者生活较简单，事业上有一些优势。生活也比较随意，例如男性可以同时keep a few relationships.
然后就是传统婚姻是社会的基石，社会的基本道德和法律很多都是围绕家庭来制定的，因为社会需要保证下一代的正常成长。并且选择独居的人往往也不会避讳SEX，由此造成的很多没爹妈的娃和单亲家庭，已经成为了重要的社会问题。
结论是，独居者有独居的自由，但有些人认为婚姻更是一种责任。等等等等。。。
自己是感觉没有偏题啦。。。
uyshua6112
发表于 2010-4-16 18:01:29
老实说这次审题我也觉得比较难。
我就是怀疑题目是不是想侧重single但是又不想太明白、好让人上当，所以才这么含糊地说live on ones own，所以我也没有点明白，也没敢很具体地往不结婚上面靠，而只是笼统地说成独自生活。
我觉得我思维根本就很僵化，竟然连注重隐私都没说出来。
zatiqlpmq
发表于 2010-4-16 23:57:48
非常感谢各位的评价。
我也觉得用without太多了，句型变化不多，我再改改。
还有个问题比较困惑，看了《10天作文》好久了，模板也准备过几个，不知道为什么实战时就不知道怎么用了？不知道各位是怎么把模板套到一个新题目中的。
zatiqlpmq
发表于 2010-4-17 06:37:49
同意，第一段确实太少了，主要是思路不开阔。
kf55hujzyq
发表于 2010-4-17 07:00:05
感觉自己审题倒是成了问题，显得非常僵硬。楼主词汇显得普通，不过论述还比较清晰。
贴个题目：看看这个可以将些什么观点？
Many parents think advertising only tells information about snacks and toys to children. But companies think advertising also tells useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
zatiqlpmq
发表于 2010-4-17 08:28:22
参与一下：
Many parents think advertising only tells information about snacks and toys to children. But companies think advertising also tells useful information. In my opinion, they both are right from their angles.
to parents:
1.many advertisings spend more time showing the snacks and toys and less time on other useful information.
2.When talking about the same advertising,most of parents can remember the main content of it.That is to say they ignore other fuction of the advertising.
3.As to the children,when they see a advertising about snack or toy they might turn to their parents directly to ask for that snack or toy regardless of other information of it.
to companies:
1.Many companies spend more money designing the advertising so that more usefull information could be shown.
2.There are too many companies to product the same product, in order to get more market share they must tell customers the adventages of their products contrast to others.
In a conclusion, advertising shown to customers often contains plenty of information,althoug companies try to show more information about their products, the customers, including parents and children, will just obtain the information they want.
我弄丢了
发表于 2010-4-17 14:31:19
In some countries today, more and more people, especially many young men and women, begin to live on their own without any help from their parents.
I think there are three reasons for this. Firstly, young people want to know more about the society without any strict regulations from their parents. As a result, they can make decisions for themselves, such as whether they would take part in social activities, or which type of clothes to buy. Secondly, telecommunication has become possible for them to keep in touch with their family and friends without meeting face to face. They can send an email to them to tell them whatever they want, or they may have a video chat with their family on the internet and see each other. Finally, there are more job opportunities waiting for them so that they can make a living by their hands. With their own salary, they can rent flats or buy laptops without their parents’ permission. They can live with more freedom.
Personally, I think there are some advantages for people to live on their own. They can obtain more living experience so that they can become more socialised than those living with their family. Perhaps they can make more friends by living on their own. Furthermore, if they are frustrated by failure, they might revalue themselves and try to improve themselves again.
However, one thing must be pointed out is that the generation gap / if people live on their own because they might not have much time to communicate with their family. I hope both families and young people can take action to combat this situation to improve the family bonds.