大中華
发表于 2012-7-1 23:58:58
贴个今天写的文章，感觉就6分，最多6.5分。花了35分钟，写了350字。字数多了，内容其实因没有什么心意。都是慎小嶷和simon的影子。这种类模板的文章不会高分。
作文ID：20120622
题目：Some say that secondary school tend to spend less time on traditional subjects such as history and should spend more time on communication skill and business courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? 题目结束
It is true that education has become a priority for the majority of students seeking to secure a bright future for their lives. In regard to the disciplines of secondary school, such as conventional course, communication techniques and business knowledge, I disagree that modern courses prevail over than the traditional ones. Therefore, I tend to believe that they are equally imperative for the young learners to acquire.
On the one hand, there are many reasons to believe that traditional courses are indispensable necessities for secondary school students. First, these disciplines could foster the students to have the primary capacity of the literacy. For instance, learning local and foreign languages have the potential to further the young learners’ skills which enable them to use language fluently. Consequently, such reading, writing and listening skills are more likely to enrich their work and life. Second, the courses, like history and geography have higher likelihood of cultivating the youngsters to gradually appreciate of the sense of national pride. In particular, if the students could learn their countries historic heroes and marvelous landscape, they would deeply love their countries and spontaneously devote their lives to them after graduation.
On the other hand, some other majors also play a pivotal role in secondary school education. First of all, the communication skill has become a significant course for most students because such life skills could enormously dominate the social relationship and academic study of the students. In particular, without good communicative capability, the young learners could not acquire the academic knowledge from the educators and their peers efficiently and effectively. Meanwhile, awkward language skills may hinder the youths to establish friendship with their counterparts and adults. Moreover, secondary school students should learn the business courses since such knowledge has been one of the important employable skills for most school graduates. Therefore, secondary schools should considerably prioritize this course at the early age of the students.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the conventional courses, communicative skill and business courses are equally important for secondary school to gain as a whole, in terms of the significance of their considerable impacts on both the work and life of the youths. In this sense, I disagree that modern courses outweigh the traditional ones.
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发表于 2012-7-2 03:30:42
买一本书，就一本
模拟雅思考官审批作文
然后就搞定了。当然你得融汇贯通。
不怕遇到困难，但是别当伸手党。
大中華
发表于 2012-7-2 12:28:54
如果你还在找口语或者作文的partner。私聊我吧。哈哈
大中華
发表于 2012-7-2 22:51:11
谢谢，我从不做伸手党。需要经常积攒rp。
我去找找这本书
大中華
发表于 2012-7-3 02:31:28
向高手学习，我会努力地
dpi0d3h8c
发表于 2012-7-3 03:10:44
别太担心，你搜索下我发的帖子，从开始准备到考试，时间上不算长，三个月，但是自己都觉得练习雅思作用对于自己的思考模式和习惯有很大的影响。
给你推荐的那本书，对于task response和coherence很有帮助。
我从来都习惯下载电子书，除非看见非常好的才会买，这本书算其中之一，至少对我来说。
其他的模板和单词之类的根本别看，越看越晕，哪些是给目标为6而且基础很差的，希望快餐式学习的同学准备的。
有空把雅思1到8的范文全部看n遍，你会发现，只有神奇的中国才会模板如此盛行，而高分作用，例如考官的范文，是没有一句废话的。
你尝试着一句模板不用，写篇作文出来看看，我写过，很多篇，你可以搜索下。
此外，澄清一点，不用模板不代表不用连接词，连接词准确应用反映了作者的思路，让人一目了然。
大中華
发表于 2012-7-3 14:31:11
真的很感谢这位176的兄弟。我刚才已经看了你的数个帖子。我正在误区里，我要走出来。
我还有一个成绩在复议，希望能成功赶在71之前出好成绩。
否则接下来的3个月或者数个月，我会用新的学习方式来提高自己。先从你推荐的书着手然后结合一些成功朋友的经验。
知道目标是什么，才能更好更快的实现。
非常欢迎你和其他朋友对我的指正，我也会把我的体会陆续写在这里。
大中華
发表于 2012-7-3 15:29:45
我基本也是看电子书，唯一买的基本都是慎小嶷的书。怎么说，书不错，但是大家的套路重复了。哈
ofnk68zx8c
发表于 2012-7-4 01:54:43
没有高手，也没有小白。
万事万物都有他的规矩和法则，掌握了然后顺应着来运作，就会顺风顺水。
如果悖逆着最基本的法则，不是说无法达成目标，而且会付出很多不必要的代价而已。
btw：不用急着找老师，自己就是自己最好的老师，然后是当你了解了雅思作文的评分标准和如何对应之后。在完全掌握雅思作用打分标准和如何应对之前，不是说不要写文章，多练习毕竟不是坏事。不过南辕北辙的故事已经太普遍的在我们身上发生着。最后的结果就是，差之毫厘，谬之千里。
所以，好好研究评分标准，看范文，看那本如何解决task response和cohesion & coherence的书吧，看完了再下笔。在这之前，可以多思考，见到题目，多想想自己的观点可能有哪些，发散思维。
别标榜自己是大龄青年，我都31了，觉得自己还嫩呢，呵呵
大中華
发表于 2012-7-4 11:40:26
赫赫，我都34了快。怎么说呢，学雅思太赶了这次，走了弯路。
静下心来，感觉一下英语的美丽和文字的玄妙。
我看完这本书，在写写小结，达到融会贯通。
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