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发表于 2012-12-8 03:31:14
按我对楼主意思的理解，改了下小作文，不妥之处大家见谅
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter because I heard that you need assistance in a project aiming to resolve environmental issues.
As I always believe that the environment plays an important role in our daily lives, I would like to assist you in the best way that I can. I could help in the following ways.
Firstly, I can help with collecting environment data of our district. As I have been living here for over 10 years, I am very familiar with this neighbourhood.
Secondly, I can provide assistance for analyzing the data, because I am a software engineer and operating software is my strong suit.
Lastly, I am a friendly and loving person. I am sure that you will find it very pleasant to work with me.
I can start from next month， Dec 21, to be exact.
If any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
ＸＸＸ
mumli361
发表于 2012-12-8 04:36:55
如果做vi用，去掉of，A can benefit a lot from B
冒天条的天蓬
发表于 2012-12-8 13:05:51
同意楼上superopengl给的修改意见。
有一个语法细节很多人可能注意不到，那就是在英文里逗号不能连接两个句子。
比如楼主大作文第一段，就最后一个句号，而且组成它的几个分句只用逗号连接而没有连词。
建议如果需要一句话里放多个分句，有两个方法：
1. 用连词连接分句
2. 把逗号改成分号，因为分号可以连接句子