qwert1978-1981
发表于 2011-11-21 20:31:51
有道理支持下
1g1b7451
发表于 2011-11-22 05:15:13
思路说的很好，但是要用英文写出来，又是另外一回事。所以7分作文才难。
明飞巧
发表于 2011-11-22 07:00:43
我也来发个练习，水平很一般见笑了
The hotel locates in a beautiful city and is very close by the famous Yancheng park. Because of this, it is a very smart choice if you spend your holiday here. The staffs here are friendly, the Christmas party in the restaurant is great, and the games are very interesting. Equally importantly, the price of the hotel is not very expense, as a 5 star holiday, it is worth CNY 500 per night. It is clear that I spend less , but enjoy more. In summary I have a very impressive stay here, and I would like to stay again at someday not far from now.
大合集q2
发表于 2011-11-22 07:53:26
ms有点道理啊，赶紧试试看
Rbagsjyaya
发表于 2011-11-22 10:45:06
马克留名