SpordSoriprub
发表于 2011-12-10 04:29:56
老兄，你的链接只有翻蔷才能上
逃避心理
发表于 2011-12-10 10:46:43
多谢楼上指出。百度文库还是审核中，快一天了。现在放到了豆丁网上，感觉跟百度文库很像，都是要注册才能下载的。不过好在注册起来还是相当方便的。
pdf文档在豆丁网的地址请参见帖子一楼。
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逃避心理
发表于 2011-12-10 13:47:10
无意中发现了一个类似经验的帖子，供各位参考：
http://www.localau.com/viewt ... id=49287#pid3434132
olive_green 发表于 28-4-2011 04:41
说到IELTS,我来给些经验
本人考了三次雅思，听力从6到8，阅读稳定在7， 写作在5.5-6.5， 口语稳定在6-6.5
听力是个循序渐进的过程，雅思的听力要求听写，很多时候你不能等那个词出现，你需要有全局的理解，我建议除了听剑桥系列，可以尝试听下TED，对提高语感很有帮助，本人最后一次听力到8，而且没有看过机经，全靠TED
阅读是个看功力的部分，雅思是有解题技巧的，但是没有大量的词汇量是不行的，没有理解，很多细节题无从做起，本人推荐国内六级英语词汇，可以随便买本背一下，对雅思很有帮助。
写作，很多人都在研究句型，语法，第一次考5.5的时候我的句型全是复杂句，但是并没有给我满意的分数。后来经人提点，大家也可以注意一下，其实是结构，很多人写了篇没有任何语法问题的文章，但还是5-5.5，为什么？整体的结构，有没有preview.,etc.事实证明这很重要，我家亲爱的就是遵循严谨的结构在G类写作中考出了7.5的高分。
口语，这个部分其实有很大部分是运气，因为是主观的评分。但是这部分确实是可以通过准备来保底。尽量多准备点topic，对考试绝对有帮助。
如果有困惑，也欢迎把你们写的发给我，我有时间可以帮忙修改下。
最后，希望不要让雅思成为移民路上的绊脚石。
http://www.localau.com/viewt ... id=49287#pid3440319
olive_green 发表于 2-5-2011 02:46
谈下a类的写作结构
首先是开头
开头部分先写背景，有一个大致的介绍；接着要写你的THESIS，很多人写开头不写THESIS;最后也是很关键的，就是要有preview,让考官根据你的preview，就知道你接着要分几步走，一篇再简练的学术类论文都该有这个部分。而这部分需要你对你要写的BODY有个很清晰的轮廓。
第二部分就是BODY，在每个你要论述的观点上，你需要有各段的主旨句，接着是supporting evidence,可以是某人说的，也可以是例子，最好老外能懂的，最后你要有一句对你这个部分的总结句。依次类推，你每个观点都需要有这样清晰的结构。
其次，就是衔接词的运用，such as, additionally, besides, moreover, further.,etc
结尾部分要先对你的全文进行概括，重述你之前论述的观点，最后你可以提出一些措施。但是千万不要涉及新的内容。
大致就是这些了，乃吾之拙见。大家可以看下自己平时练习的文章是否与上述有差距。
最后，就是语言的运用，这个需要多练习。
希望可以帮到各位烤鸭
[点评] 这些都是真知灼见，与本帖子的主旨是一致的。
该是结束这个帖子的时候了 祝福仍在奋斗中的各位！
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c4d4h88j
发表于 2011-12-10 18:14:00
这样的好文章怎能不加精
sd211962
发表于 2011-12-11 02:29:21
有一事不明。
如果一个命题 问agree or disagree?
我能主体一说为什么不同意， 主体二说我认为什么样是对的吗？ for example, the goverment should pay course fees, agree or disagree? I think peopel should pay them by themselves
逃避心理
发表于 2011-12-11 11:02:51
有一事不明。
如果一个命题 问agree or disagree?
我能主体一说为什么不同意， 主体二说我认为什么样是对的吗？ for example, the goverment should pay course fees, agree or disagree?
这么写可以的。
主体一：为什么不同意（government should pay） 主体二： 为什么（people should pay）
或者
主体一：为什么（people should pay） 主体二： 为什么不同意（government should pay）
不过感觉这个还是有点乱，如果让我写的话，应该会是
主体一（让步段）：为什么（government should pay） 主体二： 为什么（people should pay）
或者
主体一：为什么（people should pay） 主体二（让步段）： 为什么（government should pay）
就是不要纠结于agree还是disagree，如果通过一个主体段分析（people should pay）的理由是什么，另一个主体段分析government should pay的理由是什么？
最后（回应并）得出自己的观点就比较自然了。
我一般是先写自己的观点，写得饱满点。然后写让步段，写得可能会逊色点，因为时间越往后，越紧张了脑子也越混乱了。
对于考官来说，我感觉也是重点看前两段
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imfg0429
发表于 2011-12-11 21:46:51
楼主好人，能帮帮小弟看看我这篇吗？跪求相助。
Modern lifestyle means that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, with the development of economic, the lifestyle of modern society has changed a lot, some people maintain that we put less efforts and attention on children that before. However, personally, I have doubt about this opinion.
Parents are actually paying more attention on their children for they squeeze more time to company with their teenagers on both education and entertainment. Specifically, nowadays, increasingly numerous parents begin to more money and time into the interests of their kids, such as piano and painting in earlier age of them. And after school, they will also assist their children if difficulties are met. Besides, many fathers and mothers realize that they need to play a key role on helping their youngsters relieve the pressure from school, taking them to appreciate films and companying with them for the whole weekend are good cases in point. All of these activities are taking a higher proportion of the time owned by parents than ever before.
On the other hand, there is no denying that some parents are not motivated enough to spend more time on their children due to some reason. They tend to be lazy after one day work and some of them have to work overtime improving their performance. In addition, there are family members who are more willing to put efforts on their job career to earn more money. However, they are still small groups of people among public. Many families choose to have no kid when they are still in the early stage of the job career in order to avoid possible tensions between juveniles’ care and high pressure from work. Actually, modern families are very wise on how to keep balance between them.
In conclusion, I would like to advocate that it is not because of modern lifestyle that parents begin to neglect their children. On the country, they find they need to give higher priority to nurture children in order to make them be able to keep pace with modern society. As for the causes of phenomenon of neglecting children can be more sophisticated than we imagine.
灰色的鱼鱼
发表于 2011-12-12 08:17:35
为下载我专门去注册了豆丁
第一个网盘打不开
x2ahyuug9n
发表于 2011-12-12 18:11:48
谢谢yrqin
Merry Christmas
kzpcl733
发表于 2011-12-12 19:42:48
貌似我打开了，顺利下载了ye
楼主不光是个听话的好同学，还是个热心的好青年！
长篇巨制啊，跟剑桥模拟题长度相当，可以考虑出书了，就瞄准剑桥的价格定价，呵呵
多谢楼主
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