38分钟电脑写的，估计考试用笔还会慢一点。256个词。<span></span> <br />
Some people think all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree?<br />
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Some people believe that architecture is a special kind of art,as the culture and history of a place is contained in its buildings.Therefore they argue that all the new buildings should follow the traditional styles.One should take a prgressive perspective at this problem because we now live in a creative world.<br />
The first reason to support it is that new technologies are been involved into buildings everyday and some function of buildings might be quite different from old days, such as sun energy using, noise seperation.As matter of fact,the outlook of buildings have to be based on its functions.Besides that, with the process of globalization and culture assimilation, people may adopt to building styles from other places.Take china for example, a huge number of very expensive houses are built in western styles, which have a more positive market response than traditional buildings.In my opinion, it is always good to have new things on the earth and obviously people do not live in the cave like ancient days.<br />
On the other hand, hostorical buildings are treasures from our ancestors which we should protect and some of them have become places of interest. When people plan to build houses around these places, the enviromental harmony must be considered. For instance.it is hard to imagine that a skyscraper locate in the forbidden city.<br />
According to the above discussion, people should accept the creation in building styles as the world is developing fastly. But in some historical area, people should also thought thoroughly when they plan to build new buildings.<span></span>
作者: lhuhua3096 时间: 2010-11-29 17:16
能力有限，尽可能抓虫。
One should takes a progressive perspective at this problem because we now live in a creative world.
ho(i)storical buildings are treasures from our ancestors which we should protect 个人感觉protect是对人用的，对资源，历史文物应该用preserve比较贴切
根据10天作文标准，只改到上述的错误。俺也是正在搏命的人，不敢说评论。只求共勉，把TMD鸭子烤个外脆里嫩。
作者: 心如沉海 时间: 2010-11-30 02:52
这个作文离7分差距比较大。
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作者: Aballitreible 时间: 2010-11-30 05:21
这个作文离7分差距比较大。比如as the culture and history of a place is(are) contained in its buildings
类似错误不少。比如besides that,就是问题。it is hard to imagine that a skyscraper locate（S） in the forbidden city. 还有 take a prgressive perspective at this problem 。等等。
最关键的是：
分析不够深入，很多用词不地道，缺乏气势，用的大词也少。就是说，太乏味了。
影藏在作文的语言范畴以外，是一个人的分析理解能力，雅思作文虽然简单，但至少得有多个层次，一个一个往下走。道理要讲透，整个看下来，感觉6分很危险。
当年偶得8分，估计是运气，实际水平在7。我当时在国外工作一年多，做工程承包时候经常写公文，老板亲自批改，有那么几十篇东西写下来，才感觉能够比较自如的写出7分水平，没有好的老师，写作的确是最难突破的。楼主还得好好练练，上7是不容易的。