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efpsj · 发表于 2010-5-7 10:43:58

7的话是不是最好观点有新意的？

rwehua5279 · 发表于 2010-5-7 21:30:41

我觉得决对有七分吧,我当时考了6.5...在词汇上就不及你呢..这就是我们上次考的题目...但我唯一的亮点是我举了一些事例,来说明..比如,我说了,要看成功的定义,有的人认为有一个美满的家就是成功,那么他不需要学习很好..之类..我记得我为了写多字数,说了三个例子..哈哈..写满了所有纸...

rrqk9295 · 发表于 2010-5-8 01:22:44

个人推荐这本书：雅思8分万能作文

看了里面的范文会明显感觉到自己的水平差距在哪。。。特别是里面的复杂句很有借鉴价值

一车农民 · 发表于 2010-5-8 01:36:56

多谢，给我补充了一个思维：要看成功的标准是什么。
我当时举的例子是bill gates和韩寒。今天练习就没把例子插进去，看来还得多练，才能自然。

Thacerderma · 发表于 2010-5-8 07:03:23

Some people who failed at school can be highly successful in their adult life. Discuss why does this happen? And what are the main factors to get a successful life?

两个问题中明显是the latter plays a more important role.
1) success does not only depend on academic achievement
2) there are a variety of factors contributing one's successful life, such as ...,
有个别语法问题 eg.
Academic institutions focus on arts and science, but to succeed it takes more than that