<div><span style="font-size:14px;">冰冻三尺绝非一日之寒，雅思写作高分也不是短时间能够达到的。下面小编为大家整理了雅思写作7项基本原则，供考生们参考。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">1.长短句原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">way quite similar.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">2.主题句原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）。 Without</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">the questions correctly.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">3. 一二三原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因： 俗）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐， 原因：俗）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">8）most important of all, moreover, finally</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">况）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">四、 短语优先原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">I cannot bear it.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">I want it.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">五、 多实少虚原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting,</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">如：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">6.多变句式原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">1）加法（串联）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">其它的短语可以用：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">2）转折（拐弯抹角）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">condition.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">The coat was thin, but it was warm.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">更多的短语：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">of, despite, notwithstanding</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">3）因果（so, so, so）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">The snow began to fall, so we went home.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">更多短语：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">result, for this reason, so that</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">举例：This is what I can do.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">When to go, Why he goes away…</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">5）附加（多此一举）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">6）排比（排山倒海句）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">wind and ocean tides.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">life. （气势恢宏）</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">7.挑战极限原则</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">原理：同学们的文章中很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">The weather being fine, a large number of people went</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">to climb the Western Hills.</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">Africa is the second largest continent, its size being</span></div>
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<div><span style="font-size:14px;">about three times that of China.</span></div>
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