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小作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you as I am hearing there is a project established by you which need assistance, and the project is aiming to resolve some environment problems. I always believe that environment plays a very important role in our common life so I would like to support you in the following ways.
The first point I can help is to collect environment data in our district as I have been lived there for more than 10 years, that means I am very familiar with this area. The second point that I can provide assistance is to do the environment data analyse because I am a software engineer and maniputlating related anylyse software is my strong point. The last point that I can help in this project is I am a very friendly and welcoming people and you will be very happly to cooperate with me.
I will be available from next month, to be exactly, 2012/12/21.
If you have any questions, pls do not hesitate to contact with me.
I look forward to hearing your feedback in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
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大作文：
Nowadays more and more counties choose to spend a lot of money to celebrate their public holidays, some people challenged this because they thought these money should be spent on other more valuable projects, from my point of view, the celebration of the public holidays is worth the money and it can be proved by the following points.
The first point is that people is emotional breeds so what they need are not only physical materials but aslo soul stuffs, and the public holidays represent a period of unforgettable time for the people, as consequce the people in this country will hold some celebration ceremony to memorize this important momories.
The second point is although the celebrations for the public holidays will cost a huge amount of money, there will be a varity of relevent business firms that can benefit a lot of from this. And the employee in these firms can enhance their living standards because of the profits that gained from the celebrations. At the same time, very successful celebrations can make the country enjoy a more famous reputation in the whole world, as a result, this can attract more visitors from other countriies and this will assist this country’s tourism with nodoubt.
The further point that need to be discussed about the celebration is it motivates innovations. Obviously to hold the celebrations need a sort of different machines and technologies, and several related industries will invent a lot of new technologies to satisfy the demands of celebrations.
At last, it is very necessary to cosider why there are so many people blame these celebrations? The main reason is they believe there are more urgent situations that need the more than the celebrations, but in a healthy developed society, there will lese possiblity for these accidents.
In conclusion, when the government make plans about how to spend their money, there should be some criterions existing, but in healthy societies, the costs for the public holidays celebrations are essential.
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发表于 2012-12-2 13:59:02
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